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November 6, 2009
By shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3


A giant ball of fire shining in the sky
Slowly lowering as the day ends

The sky looks like an art project from 3rd grade
Different colors placed at random yet looking great

The sun slowly disappears under the horizon
My art project disappears too

What’s left is a shiny sliver of silver light
And sparkling stars everywhere

The sky has changed in a matter of minutes
You’re thoughts have changed too

You look out and take a deep breath
Isn’t it beautiful?



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shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 5:50 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Mine is Lauren :) what grade r u in?

on Jan. 11 2010 at 9:51 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

have a wonderful day

p.s. what is your real name? if i may ask. mine is Danielle

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 11 2010 at 9:35 am
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

okay good :)

on Jan. 10 2010 at 2:45 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

I will.

tink

on Jan. 8 2010 at 7:06 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

okay i will

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:49 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

whoops. Haha I meant new and writing (in my previous comment) lol

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 8 2010 at 5:47 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Ya I have submitted one knew problem but i am waiting for editors approval. That is so cool you have submitted something. Be sure to tell me when they approve it. I know I will love reading it :)

on Jan. 8 2010 at 3:35 pm
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

hey. how has it been. have you written anymore latly? I have been waiting for more. i have written more but I am waiting for the editors to edit them and approve. well i gotta go. have a wonderful day.

tink.

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Jan. 3 2010 at 7:36 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Haha :) thanks. Ur really good too :)

angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:24 am
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

I agree its really good ..but mostly creative , We need more people who can write like this !!

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 12:07 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Merry Christmas to u to! :) also Happy New year!!!! :)

on Dec. 18 2009 at 9:53 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

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Be yourself!!!

I am glad i could help. have a merry Christmas.

Tink

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2009 at 5:53 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

thank you soo much!!!! you just made my day!!!!! :) thanx tink!

on Dec. 17 2009 at 9:57 am
ilovetinkerbell GOLD, Raytown, Missouri
13 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself!!!

Great job. i love it . it is so relaxing. I love how described the sky. great job and keep up the work.

Tink




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