November 6, 2009
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A giant ball of fire shining in the sky
Slowly lowering as the day ends

The sky looks like an art project from 3rd grade
Different colors placed at random yet looking great

The sun slowly disappears under the horizon
My art project disappears too

What’s left is a shiny sliver of silver light
And sparkling stars everywhere

The sky has changed in a matter of minutes
You’re thoughts have changed too

You look out and take a deep breath
Isn’t it beautiful?

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ilovetinkerbell said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 7:06 pm
okay i will
ilovetinkerbell said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 3:35 pm
hey. how has it been. have you written anymore latly? I have been waiting for more. i have written more but I am waiting for the editors to edit them and approve. well i gotta go. have a wonderful day.
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 5:47 pm
Ya I have submitted one knew problem but i am waiting for editors approval. That is so cool you have submitted something. Be sure to tell me when they approve it. I know I will love reading it :)
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 5:49 pm
whoops. Haha I meant new and writing (in my previous comment) lol
ilovetinkerbell replied...
Jan. 10, 2010 at 2:45 pm
I will.
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 9:35 am
okay good :)
ilovetinkerbell replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 9:51 am
have a wonderful day
p.s. what is your real name? if i may ask. mine is Danielle
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 11, 2010 at 5:50 pm
Mine is Lauren :) what grade r u in?
riedel said...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 10:24 am
I agree its really good ..but mostly creative , We need more people who can write like this !!
shabam34 replied...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 7:36 pm
Haha :) thanks. Ur really good too :)
ilovetinkerbell said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 9:57 am
Great job. i love it . it is so relaxing. I love how described the sky. great job and keep up the work.
shabam34 replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 5:53 pm
thank you soo much!!!! you just made my day!!!!! :) thanx tink!
ilovetinkerbell replied...
Dec. 18, 2009 at 9:53 am
I am glad i could help. have a merry Christmas.
shabam34 replied...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 12:07 pm
Merry Christmas to u to! :) also Happy New year!!!! :)
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