Feeling

November 5, 2009
By YouCanCallMeAlex SILVER, Cavecreek, Arizona
YouCanCallMeAlex SILVER, Cavecreek, Arizona
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I'm sick and tired of cring
CAn't you see I'm dying?
My life is going to hell
It's like I'm under a spell
I wish things were all well
But there not
And I as Sit here criss-cross applesauce
I throw my arms in the air and shout
"Why doesn't anybody love me?"



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on Dec. 7 2009 at 5:43 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away."

totally feel ya there.....nice poem short but good...as far as constrctive criticism goes, id check your spelling on some things




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