November 5, 2009
Its time to remove my mask
Got to come out from hiding
I cant run away from love
Even though I don’t have any
Sooner or later, a guy will do the same
Time heals wounds
If your heart is open, love will come in
Make sure to listen to your heart
Never hide from love
If you have a mask on, reveal yourself
So you can get noticed for the person u r
So hold out your hands
Fly off into the sky
And leave your mask behind

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Yvonne32 said...
Jan. 29, 2010 at 4:25 pm
This is very good! I love how it emphasizes taking off the mask, and the way it came across to me was that you should always be yourself... truly an amazing piece of work
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 30, 2010 at 11:02 am
thank you so much!!! the way it came across to you is the way that i ment 4 it to be~ thanks for the feedback, can u chek out some of my othr work?? (:
Titan12339 said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 8:50 pm
It would be better if you didn't use U and r as words, but the last three lines, if you could please check out my poems and my story (just click my name and you can get links =)..)
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 9:59 pm
i will defentily chek out ur work!!! thnks so much 4 the feedback!!! chek out any of my other poems if u can!~
Suzie17 said...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 10:20 am
Great poem! Keep writing.
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 30, 2009 at 9:54 pm
plz chek out othr poems i have :) thnx 4 the feed bck
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