Masquerade

November 5, 2009
By Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)


Its time to remove my mask
Got to come out from hiding
I cant run away from love
Even though I don’t have any
Sooner or later, a guy will do the same
Time heals wounds
If your heart is open, love will come in
Make sure to listen to your heart
Never hide from love
If you have a mask on, reveal yourself
So you can get noticed for the person u r
So hold out your hands
Fly off into the sky
And leave your mask behind


The author's comments:
this poem shows that no matter who you are, you can find love!!! dint be afrid to show who you truly are :)

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on Jan. 30 2010 at 11:02 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thank you so much!!! the way it came across to you is the way that i ment 4 it to be~ thanks for the feedback, can u chek out some of my othr work?? (:

on Jan. 29 2010 at 4:25 pm
brysmarie12 PLATINUM, Neoga, Illinois
22 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am the author of my own life... unfortunately I'm writing in pen and can't erase my mistakes.

This is very good! I love how it emphasizes taking off the mask, and the way it came across to me was that you should always be yourself... truly an amazing piece of work

on Dec. 4 2009 at 9:59 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

i will defentily chek out ur work!!! thnks so much 4 the feedback!!! chek out any of my other poems if u can!~

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:50 pm
Titan12339 SILVER, Bellbrook, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I dwell in chaos, for love is madness." Jason Storm, son of Chaos god of darkness and madness In a Camp Half Blood RP.

It would be better if you didn't use U and r as words, but the last three lines, if you could please check out my poems and my story (just click my name and you can get links =)..)

Joyful_angel said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 9:54 pm
plz chek out othr poems i have :) thnx 4 the feed bck

Suzie17 GOLD said...
on Nov. 30 2009 at 10:20 am
Suzie17 GOLD, West Monroe, Louisiana
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Great poem! Keep writing.


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