The Truth About Forever!

November 5, 2009
Does forever even exist?
Or is it just A myth?
The word is so often thrown around.
But most always hits the ground.
Was forever created for the peace of mind?
Can we all seriously be that blind?
Or is there A forever out there?
Are there people who actually do care?
About this fake work.
That i am surprised can even be heard!
Is forever truly real?
Maybe someday i will be lucky enough to feel,
Feel something other then its false pretense.
Maybe in the future this will all make sense.
Will I ever learn the truth about FOREVER?

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AndThisIsReal This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 2:56 pm
I appreciate your comments too.
It seems like you've been dealt some unfortunate cards.
I know how that feels.
I hope your Christmas went well this year.
Mine actually did. :)
I like this poem its full of meaning and is so true.
Keep writing. :)
Hayz~Hardcore replied...
Feb. 28, 2010 at 9:41 am
heyy just now got ur comment sorry it took so long, iv been really busy and yes for the first time in 6 yrs my Christmas went absolutly amazing, i hope urs went well. and i have been dealt some pretty crappy cards but im getting through it, iv actually just found my faith again which means the world to me now! and thank u for ur comments they mean so much to me and im glad u like my work!
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