The Truth About Forever!

November 5, 2009
By Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"


Does forever even exist?
Or is it just A myth?
The word is so often thrown around.
But most always hits the ground.
Was forever created for the peace of mind?
Can we all seriously be that blind?
Or is there A forever out there?
Are there people who actually do care?
About this fake work.
That i am surprised can even be heard!
Is forever truly real?
Maybe someday i will be lucky enough to feel,
Feel something other then its false pretense.
Maybe in the future this will all make sense.
Will I ever learn the truth about FOREVER?


The author's comments:
So many people have promised me forever."ill forever be your friend" "ill love you forever" "Ill be here for you forever" I'v heard it all but they have always left me at some point i swear it never ends...HOPE YOU LIKE :)

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on Feb. 28 2010 at 9:41 am
Hayz~Hardcore SILVER, Johnstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"peace on earth"

heyy just now got ur comment sorry it took so long, iv been really busy and yes for the first time in 6 yrs my Christmas went absolutly amazing, i hope urs went well. and i have been dealt some pretty crappy cards but im getting through it, iv actually just found my faith again which means the world to me now! and thank u for ur comments they mean so much to me and im glad u like my work!

on Dec. 27 2009 at 2:56 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

I appreciate your comments too.

It seems like you've been dealt some unfortunate cards.

I know how that feels.

I hope your Christmas went well this year.

Mine actually did. :)

I like this poem its full of meaning and is so true.

Keep writing. :)




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