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So I Laid There

November 5, 2009
By Rjthesk8rboi BRONZE, Derby, Kansas
Rjthesk8rboi BRONZE, Derby, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
live free or die hard


So I laid there
Still like a rock
So I laid there
Thinking about Brock
He was a good soldier like the little boy who never stopped
So I laid there
Waiting like a ticking bomb
Waiting to blow
So I laid there
Waiting for the silent footsteps in the night
So I laid there
About to snipe
So I laid there
Breathing the air of death
So I laid there thinking about my girl Beth
So I laid there
Dreaming about my precious, precious kids
So I laid there
Waiting for him to come
Finally there he was
Like a ghost at night
Nobody new but my precious eye
So the deed is done.


The author's comments:
i dont realy do this type of stuff but it sounded cool tell me if this was a good poem

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