Day By Day

November 4, 2009
By angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "


Day by day
The sun comes up
another day has come upon us again
but how can this be another day
With you being so far away .
My outsides so bright and cheerful
My insides are bursting,my heart is throbing cause I miss you
I miss you so much it feels like my heart cant hardly bare...


The author's comments:
This was about a guy I moved away from ...:(

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on Jan. 13 2010 at 5:26 pm
D..j.. PLATINUM, Clifton, New Jersey
26 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is not what you are or how much you own, but who you are.

i love how it was short but u managed 2 make me feel the topic was relatable and it was just completely beautiful plz check out some of my work i could use some tough critics

on Dec. 30 2009 at 12:09 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Wow, I really liked that one. Even though it was short, it still brought emotion to the reader. GREAT JOB :)

angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:10 am
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

Im checking all of them..yet there all amazing ..you have real talent !!

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 1:40 am
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

sure! I would be glad too. Can you check out some of my work too? :)

angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 26 2009 at 9:23 pm
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

Thanks , Im glad it wa goodenough for you to post on it ...plz ...check out some more of my work ?

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 21 2009 at 12:06 pm
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Aww :( thats sad but really good! Keep it up! :)


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