Day By Day

November 4, 2009
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Day by day
The sun comes up
another day has come upon us again
but how can this be another day
With you being so far away .
My outsides so bright and cheerful
My insides are bursting,my heart is throbing cause I miss you
I miss you so much it feels like my heart cant hardly bare...





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D..j.. said...
Jan. 13, 2010 at 5:26 pm
i love how it was short but u managed 2 make me feel the topic was relatable and it was just completely beautiful plz check out some of my work i could use some tough critics
 
TeamJacobArchuleta said...
Dec. 30, 2009 at 12:09 am
Wow, I really liked that one. Even though it was short, it still brought emotion to the reader. GREAT JOB :)
 
shabam34 said...
Dec. 21, 2009 at 12:06 pm
Aww :( thats sad but really good! Keep it up! :)
 
riedel replied...
Dec. 26, 2009 at 9:23 pm
Thanks , Im glad it wa goodenough for you to post on it ...plz ...check out some more of my work ?
 
shabam34 replied...
Dec. 27, 2009 at 1:40 am
sure! I would be glad too. Can you check out some of my work too? :)
 
riedel replied...
Dec. 29, 2009 at 10:10 am
Im checking all of them..yet there all amazing ..you have real talent !!
 
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