Birth Mom

November 4, 2009
By angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "


I've been missing you
FOr 13 long years
Through diapers snd bottles
Pull-ups and Sippies
All these long years,
I have been mising you
Sometimes I wonder if you miss me to .
Sometimes I cry and think of you
But now I know Iam with a good family now ,And were trying hard to get through
And I know in my heart it will all work out ...
Do you miss me


The author's comments:
I never met my birth mother and I rote this poem one day when I was really thinking about her ... I hope some of the readders can relate to the poem .

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angier GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 12:14 pm
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

Thanks -check out and poston some more of my work

angier GOLD said...
on Feb. 25 2010 at 12:13 pm
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

Thats sad - I was adopted ...

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:04 am
Sixteen PLATINUM, Jaipur, Other
20 articles 0 photos 73 comments

Favorite Quote:
Its not denial. I'm just very selective about the reality I accept. - Calvin

i cant relate to it either...but its really sad...it was great!!!

u really made me fell lyk wat it would be like for you

on Feb. 10 2010 at 3:19 pm
WriteForLove GOLD, New Iberia, Louisiana
13 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Laugh as much as you breathe and love as long as you live."

I know exactly how you feel. My mother left me when I was three so I know the hurt it brings. I can feel the emotion. It was really great.

on Dec. 30 2009 at 12:03 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Well I can't relate, but I could definitely see how you feel through your writing. It was excellent! Really sad and touching, but great! :)

angier GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2009 at 10:09 am
angier GOLD, Centerville ,Pa, Pennsylvania
12 articles 6 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is love. But a little chocolate now and then doesn't hurt. "

Thanks a bunch !! Im glad you like it ...Your stuff is awesome too !! Thanks again !!

shabam34 GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2009 at 1:42 am
shabam34 GOLD, St. Helens, Oregon
11 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
Laughing until your stomach hurts :)
That's what friends are for <3

Aww! Thats soo sad :( I really like ur writing :) i LUV all of the pieces I hav read that u wrote :) u really hav talent. Please post more!!!!!!




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