My Sweet Sin

November 5, 2009
By CletusTheCool GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
CletusTheCool GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great wisdom always encounters violent opposition from mediocre minds.."
"Evil is always unspectacular. Evil sits at our table. Evil eats our food."


Hello sin
Let's begin
Can't stand this game
Causes me no pain
Staring into the glass
But through it I cannot pass

We ponder each other carefully
I make my actions slowly
We have to remain a secret
I don't know if we can keep it

There are some who think we
are bad for each other
But dear, we were made to be together
Sitting on her perch above all else
Your thoughts she will impose herself
For one so condemned, how can she be so condemning?
Her voice rings in my ears, it stings

In my heart you are hidden
Because baby, you're forbidden
Your thorns scratch those who try and find you
Only by myself, you'll pull through

The less of you, the more I am desired
The more desire, the more you are required

First we need a secret void
Where in you, I'll find my joy
The devil's dwelling we both lay
For preservation, we must pray

I've kept my distance far too long
Because they figured you are wrong
All we need is more boundaries
But boundaries fall like apples off trees


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on Mar. 10 2010 at 4:52 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
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I love how this poem is different. Very creative. Very "original". Haha! But great work. This actually deserves credit since this isn't copyrighted. If you'd like, come and check out my work. I think you will like them. THanks!

on Mar. 10 2010 at 3:40 pm
CletusTheCool GOLD, Bolingbrook, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 14 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Great wisdom always encounters violent opposition from mediocre minds.."
"Evil is always unspectacular. Evil sits at our table. Evil eats our food."

I wasn't trying to sound mean, so sorry if I did.. but I just thought it wasn't cool that you get all that nice feedback when it belongs to Amy Lee. But umm yeah, all my stuff is original... so I don't know.

on Mar. 10 2010 at 2:29 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

Hmmm sounds lyke a song Ive heard before maybe from a nand you dont even listin to!!!


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