ive been

By jessica<3, lenoir shityy, TN

ive been here
seems for a while now
ive been your cryin shulder
but you havent cried on me
ive been waiting on you
its just you keep leaving
ive been trustworthy
but you havent trusted me
ive been interested
you seem to be over me
ive been trying my hardest
but now im stopping
i know you dont care
and thats okay
dotn worry about me
i know youll forget me
and because you already have
i only wish the best life for you
know im saying
ive been

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wriiteo2iinspiire said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 12:18 pm:

this is a really good poem, can anyone help me ! i dont know when ym poems will be submitted and i have been waiting for about two-three weeks now. and i dont know how to siqn in my actual account bc it says im connected with facebook and the email i use for my facebook acc. has been hacked so i cannot log into it. Face book is blocked on my skoool computers so i do not know how to log in
PLEASE HELP!

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ashbash said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 7:36 pm:

again, wow. i just read your poem "i understand" and they are both amazing! good job!!!!!!!

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Lillybear said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 5:45 pm:

i read ur other one it was cool! But i think i like this one better! Really good job and keep writing

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chu-chi,!!! said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 10:47 am:

This was really good and I enjoyed reading it. I truly loved it, because it's deep and I took in the overall meaning of it.
So keep writing. Just one thing, fix your spelling and punctuation.
Please read some of my poetry and give me feedback as well!

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plaisted21 said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 7:44 pm:

i think this is a very good poem and it really captures the most common way relationships work out. great job!!

jessica<3 replied...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 6:22 pm :

thank yall for the comments : ) good or bad please tell me what yall think : )

Havengirl replied...
Apr. 28, 2010 at 10:43 pm :

I liked it :)

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blingblang4eva said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 5:52 pm:

very good poem :) i can relate. very well written and thoughtful

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Powd3er's-Lov3-4-Lif3 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 2:59 pm:

This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Kelz1141 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 2:28 pm:

I like your poem, but good its seems a little rambly and repetative. But good job!

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lightbearer said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 12:17 pm:

i like a poem that tells a story. your excellence in the making.