ive been

November 17, 2009
By jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS!!!!! <3


ive been here
seems for a while now
ive been your cryin shulder
but you havent cried on me
ive been waiting on you
its just you keep leaving
ive been trustworthy
but you havent trusted me
ive been interested
you seem to be over me
ive been trying my hardest
but now im stopping
i know you dont care
and thats okay
dotn worry about me
i know youll forget me
and because you already have
i only wish the best life for you
know im saying
ive been



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on Apr. 28 2010 at 10:43 pm
AinsleyChernek SILVER, Eatonville, Washington
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I liked it :)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 12:18 pm
this is a really good poem, can anyone help me ! i dont know when ym poems will be submitted and i have been waiting for about two-three weeks now. and i dont know how to siqn in my actual account bc it says im connected with facebook and the email i use for my facebook acc. has been hacked so i cannot log into it. Face book is blocked on my skoool computers so i do not know how to log in

PLEASE HELP!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 7:36 pm
iAmTheStardust PLATINUM, Moon Twp., Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"The prettiest flowers grow in the biggest pile of manure."

again, wow. i just read your poem "i understand" and they are both amazing! good job!!!!!!!

on Nov. 23 2009 at 5:45 pm
Lillybear BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 8 comments

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A hug is like a boomerang - you get it back right away.

i read ur other one it was cool! But i think i like this one better! Really good job and keep writing

on Nov. 23 2009 at 10:47 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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This was really good and I enjoyed reading it. I truly loved it, because it's deep and I took in the overall meaning of it.

So keep writing. Just one thing, fix your spelling and punctuation.

Please read some of my poetry and give me feedback as well!

on Nov. 22 2009 at 6:22 pm
jessica<3 BRONZE, Lenoir Shityy, Tennessee
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
ACTIONS SPEAK LOUDER THAN WORDS!!!!! <3

thank yall for the comments : ) good or bad please tell me what yall think : )

on Nov. 21 2009 at 7:44 pm
plaisted21 SILVER, Farmington, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"yesterday is history, tomorrow's a mystery and today is a gift; thats why they call it the present".

i think this is a very good poem and it really captures the most common way relationships work out. great job!!

on Nov. 21 2009 at 5:52 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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very good poem :) i can relate. very well written and thoughtful

on Nov. 20 2009 at 2:59 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

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on Nov. 20 2009 at 2:28 pm
KellyR GOLD, Richmond, Virginia
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We don't read and write poetry because it's cute. We read and write poetry because we are members of the human race. And the human race is filled with passion. And medicine, law, business, engineering, these are noble pursuits and necessary to sustain life. But poetry, beauty, romance, love, these are what we stay alive for.

I like your poem, but good its seems a little rambly and repetative. But good job!

on Nov. 20 2009 at 12:17 pm
lightbearer GOLD, North Bloomfield, Ohio
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i like a poem that tells a story. your excellence in the making.


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