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The Colors of Blood Chapter 1: The Runaway

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I looked at the rain drop,
That hit the window,
That rain drop shriveled,
As if it was a fig,

Which was exactly,
What I wanted to do...


Everything outside of the window,
Looked like,
A blur,
As the car drove fast

The rain drops,
Blended in with,
Variety of leafs,
Making the rain drops look like the color...

Red,
This reminded me of blood…

Which I was least eager,
To think about,
In fact that was the exact thing,
That got me into this,
Fumble…

I felt a tear,
Swelling,
Then it slowly drizzled,
Down my cheek

“Why,
Why me?”


I thought of all the things,
I left behind,
My family,
My friends,
My town I once lived in,
Since I was a baby,
All distance memories

My life,
Will start all knew,
But I knew everything,
That haunted me will come back,
And brouhaha will form

In till then,
I must rebuild,
What I messed up

“This is my stop,"
The yellow door,
Slanted open..

I was blinded,
But not only from the sun light, But also from my senses,
For only my,
Heart shall lead the way…





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RLJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 1:36 pm
PLEASE COMMENT tell me if u like or not...
Its suppose to be a story in poetry form but tell me its good bc I have a part two to it and if u like it I will post part 2
 
KiraKira replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 12:34 pm
I wouldn't use so many commas. Besides that, I really like where you are going with this. :)
 
RLJoy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 2:41 pm
thanks for the comment. I will post the second one later
 
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