November 7, 2009
You never tell me you love me
Your never around
But when you are
I feel that your not here for me
Why can't you tell me what's wrong
Is it me?
Is it you?
Or is it us?

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babygirl576This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 15, 2012 at 8:55 am
your never alone; it just seems like you are. Comment my poems
ColeN.Kuznia said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 10:08 am
good poem, good message. And alone, never.... please comment my poems
xXOneWishXx said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 9:07 pm
Your defiently not the only one, life jus sucks like that sometimes...but everyone gets through it eventually.
Ms.me_2 said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 5:30 pm
I know I've been through it and am going through it but I know I'm going to come out a winner in the end.
cyanidecaleph said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 2:50 pm
I like this poem and how you question to hint you're confused. Great poem. Come and check mind if you'd like. Thanks.
Snap Crackle Pop said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 6:39 pm
omg this is so sweet but its so true in life i love this one said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 9:47 pm
i liked it. it was good. check out some of my work please
mellow_melon This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 4:51 pm
i love the last three lines, because its like saying is it one of us thats the problem, or do we just not mix? well that was my interpretation haha but it was good! i thought it couldve flowed a little better in tee beginning but it was good, and i thought the way you ended it was very powerful
writerxchicx said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 9:36 am
I like that this is easy to relate to and it's simple. I think that everyone has been through this (I'm going through it now) which is great. I would have liked more emotion coming through but otherwise, great job!
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 2:52 pm
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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Hallow said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 10:48 am
It's simple, which I like, but I think it lacks in definition. It's really easy to relate to, which is good, but the emotion isn't as expressed as I would like.
Slevin91 replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 7:58 pm
I agree--I love the simplicity but this might err too much on the side of leaving us wondering.
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