confused

November 7, 2009
By xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
xxMissingyouxx GOLD, Newfield, New Jersey
13 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is like a butterfly, hold it too close, it'll crush.. hold it too loose, it'll fly away"


You never tell me you love me
Your never around
But when you are
I feel that your not here for me
Why can't you tell me what's wrong
Is it me?
Is it you?
Or is it us?


The author's comments:
i would think that most of you guys that read this has been through this, i hope i'm not the only one. please comment.thnx

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on May. 15 2012 at 8:55 am
babygirl576 PLATINUM, Marion, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
You lied, and I cried. You're a jerk, so I was hurt. You're a
deceiver, But I was a believer. Sorry I wasted your time, I guess?

your never alone; it just seems like you are. Comment my poems

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 10:08 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

good poem, good message. And alone, never.... please comment my poems

on Nov. 23 2009 at 9:07 pm
xXOneWishXx BRONZE, Sewell, New Jersey
3 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people wish for Money, Success, Fame, but my One and Only wish was for you to be happy, even if it means i'm not.

Your defiently not the only one, life jus sucks like that sometimes...but everyone gets through it eventually.

Ms.me_2 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 5:30 pm
Ms.me_2 BRONZE, Lake Mary, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A womans heart should be so hidden in Christ that a man must seek him first to find her"

I know I've been through it and am going through it but I know I'm going to come out a winner in the end.

on Nov. 19 2009 at 2:50 pm
calephchad BRONZE, Guin, Alabama
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments
I like this poem and how you question to hint you're confused. Great poem. Come and check mind if you'd like. Thanks.

on Nov. 18 2009 at 6:39 pm
omg this is so sweet but its so true in life i love this one

on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:47 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i liked it. it was good. check out some of my work please

on Nov. 17 2009 at 7:58 pm
Slevin91 BRONZE, Rolling Hills, California
1 article 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
The ability to read awoke inside me some long dormant craving to be mentally alive.
--Malcolm X

I agree--I love the simplicity but this might err too much on the side of leaving us wondering.

on Nov. 17 2009 at 4:51 pm
mellow_melon PLATINUM, Jefferson, Maryland
41 articles 14 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but my the number of moments that take our breath away."

i love the last three lines, because its like saying is it one of us thats the problem, or do we just not mix? well that was my interpretation haha but it was good! i thought it couldve flowed a little better in tee beginning but it was good, and i thought the way you ended it was very powerful

on Nov. 17 2009 at 9:36 am
writerxchicx SILVER, Wyalusing, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 12 comments
I like that this is easy to relate to and it's simple. I think that everyone has been through this (I'm going through it now) which is great. I would have liked more emotion coming through but otherwise, great job!

on Nov. 16 2009 at 2:52 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

Hallow SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 10:48 am
Hallow SILVER, Peru, Indiana
6 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Most people don't know how they're gonna feel from one moment to the next, but a dope fiend has a pretty good idea. They just look at the labels on the little bottles.

It's simple, which I like, but I think it lacks in definition. It's really easy to relate to, which is good, but the emotion isn't as expressed as I would like.


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