Intertwined

November 4, 2009
By Muse16 BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
Muse16 BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't like something changes it...if you can't change it, change your attitude about it."


Intertwined the two of us;… two.
I am me and you are you.
Both very different but one in the same.
Who made me a better person?
It is you to blame.
And for that I thank you.
You were there from the start.
And I feel like with that, I owe you my heart.
You made me feel pretty when my insecurities showed.
You lifted my spirit when the future wasn't known.
You gave me the strength when the news got too hard to bare.
And when I thought I was alone, when I turned around you were always there.
Together at last the two of us two;
I am me, and you are you.
I can finally open up to you.
And understand that you are the thing that's happened to me.
I’m thankful that you are you and I am me.
United together in this world, a bond so unique.
When I'm with you I feel so complete.
Intertwined us two,...our love so pure, and sweet.


The author's comments:
If you have someone who truly cares about you,...you need to show them that you truly care too.

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on Nov. 18 2009 at 2:48 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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Muse16 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 10:40 pm
Muse16 BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't like something changes it...if you can't change it, change your attitude about it."

Thank You very much. As a writter it feels good to know that someone appreciates my work.=)

breezer11 GOLD said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 6:46 pm
breezer11 GOLD, Cinci, Ohio
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I was searching for a poem to show my boyfriend and found this. It is truly amazing how everything you stated is so true and put into the most beautiful words. GREAT!! :)


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