Girl Without A Mask

November 4, 2009
Boy meets girl they fall in love.
Girl gives everything she has and then some more
Guy controls his puppet girl
She doesn't see she doesn't know
The mask put on her face.
SHe leaves her friends she leaves her life.
All to keep him happy.
Devoted girl greedy boy that's where the story ends.
Life she Gains. Love she's lost.
Free to be anything,
Free to do anything.
This she takes with such a gasp the family cannot see.
This lovely girl in her way, is falling down now that she walks on her own in the fresh air.

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blingblang4eva said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 6:18 pm
good poem :0 i can totally relate
JasmineMarie248 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 5:09 pm
This is really good.
How long did it take you to actually get over him?
Writer_4_lyfe replied...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 11:29 am
I'm still not over him. Thanks for the comments though. said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:03 pm
this was cute. i liked it. sometimes our best poetry comes from our raw emotions whether good or bad. its true i the real world also. keep on writing:)
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