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Girl Without A Mask

November 4, 2009
By Writer_4_lyfe BRONZE, Lansing, Michigan
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Writer_4_lyfe BRONZE, Lansing, Michigan
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Boy meets girl they fall in love.
Girl gives everything she has and then some more
Guy controls his puppet girl
She doesn't see she doesn't know
The mask put on her face.
SHe leaves her friends she leaves her life.
All to keep him happy.
Devoted girl greedy boy that's where the story ends.
Life she Gains. Love she's lost.
Free to be anything,
Free to do anything.
This she takes with such a gasp the family cannot see.
This lovely girl in her way, is falling down now that she walks on her own in the fresh air.

© Lashieta F., Kannapolis, NC

The author's comments:
I just broke up with my BF after over a year. This is about my struggles getting back to my life now that i can breathe and think again.
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Writer_4_lyfe BRONZE said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 11:29 am
Writer_4_lyfe BRONZE, Lansing, Michigan
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Live, Love, Do stupid Stuff XD

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I'm still not over him. Thanks for the comments though.
blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Nov. 21 2009 at 6:18 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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good poem :0 i can totally relate
JasmineMarie248 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:09 pm
JasmineMarie248 BRONZE, Glens Falls, New York
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You never truly love a person, until the thought of hurting them, is enough to break your own heart.

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This is really good.

How long did it take you to actually get over him?
choirchic101 SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:03 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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this was cute. i liked it. sometimes our best poetry comes from our raw emotions whether good or bad. its true i the real world also. keep on writing:)