RIP DAD , SHAWN JAN 7TH , 2008

November 3, 2009
By Dynamics SILVER, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
Dynamics SILVER, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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Daddy come back.
I want you back.
Why did you have to go.
It's just not the same without you.
We still get mail with your name on it.
It makes me sad every time i see the envelopes.
Mommy's always crying.
She's always yelling too.
She makes me cry a lot but not as much as you.
I'm always thinking about you.
Your always making me teary-eyed.
I love you daddy why did you have to go.
I miss you a lot but you obviously don't know.
Otherwise you wouldn't have had to go.
God makes me mad because he took you away.
It's hard not to cry in church but i go anyway.
Sometimes when I'm all alone and i have time to think.
I think about you and i cry and cry and cry.
Some people think "oh you should be over this"
But then i think to myself you don't know how it feels to be in this pain
or to how hard it is to make it go away.
Councilors try to help me but they don't help at all.
My head hurts all the time, especially when I'm about to cry.
Its hard to type down these words as tears blur up my eyes.
When i try to speak about you i choke and then i start to cry
I miss you daddy why did you have to go.


The author's comments:
My died dad from a gun shot wound in his side i really miss him

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on Jan. 7 2010 at 11:15 am
Dynamics SILVER, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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mummykitty said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 10:33 am
I tried to give this 5 stars but it said thanks when I had only hit one. my heart goes out to this child. nobody can tell you when you should get over the loss of a parent, or anyone. cry all you want sweatheart and know your dad loves you even in heaven. It is because he loves you he went away to make this country safe. Love him and be proud of him and know he will alwlays love you even if he didn't always show it the way you needed him too..


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