The Ocean

November 2, 2009
By adriiiixx BRONZE, New City, New York
adriiiixx BRONZE, New City, New York
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The ocean holds many mysteries deep within, ones that must be searched in order to be found
Hundreds of creatures swimming, waiting to be shore bound
Eventually the current will pull them in, whether or not they are in pain

Out goes the sun, and in comes the rain
Calm is what it used to be until the thunder and lightning starts
Echoing across the water until the thunder eventually parts
And with the waves and currents and rip tides, no one knows quite what to expect next
Never underestimate the power of the ocean for away you will be swept


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on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:48 am
McFerraro..this was a very good comment i completely agree!

on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:46 am
Adriana S, this poem completely changed my life, it was absolutely incredible, I look at everything differently now. I love love love it. Will you marry me?

Mcferraro said...
on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:39 am
ADDRRIII...mad good

on Nov. 17 2009 at 8:06 am
milksodapop BRONZE, New City, New York
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Great Poem!


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