Eternal Seams

Definitely a favorite of mine now. I hope that you write more poetry because I am now in love with your work. Lol:) Checkout some of my work sometime?

ok....the structure of this is so creative, and the feeling is really cool and intense. love love love love

This poem is really good. It usually takes more words to describe things clearly. In this case, I think, the use of less words makes it better. good work.

AWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this poem .. your poems are amazing! They are really great!!

your a great writer =)

i love this type of poetry, and writing in general. totally random yet so specific, and extremely insightful. good job :)

I Love How You Write, It Makes You Think :)

i love it =):
5*s.....most definately original...i wish my poems were as original as yours(LUCKEEEE)

Wow! This is great. I loved it. The flow of it sounds like...a song. Good job!
If you have time, will you please check out my work. Comment and rate please? Thanks!

This is great! Love the form of it, it's so original! Beautiful.

Wow. I really liked this! You're a great poet.

you are a really great writer

Hey <br /> I told you I would Comment ^.^ <br /> I rele lyke the format of the poem <br /> its great =p<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> XxThe Whole Time You Were Talking I Didnt Hear A Single Word You Said B/C Th3 Whole Time You Were Talking I Was Picturing You DeadXx

I was the one who accidentally gave this a one star review. Sorry, I meant four stars. This poem gave me a deep feeling of hopelessness and fear of being lost forever. Is that what you were after? It's channeling Poe, for sure..."The Bells" Is that what his poem, similar to this is called?

i like it!!! :) and thanks for the commet on my poem :)