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We were friends, the best ones,
when you left the town to live far away,
so far, so distant,
our friendship would break,
i was afraid.
We wrote letters, we kept calling,
yet, i was frightened,
gone was our intimacy.
Alas!...i lost another great friend.

After years, ages it seemed,
we met, we could not speak.
Our tongues were locked,
and our minds blocked.
There was so much to say,
but nothing came out.
staring so blankly,
feeling so shaky...we just looked...

Then you spoke..
Ah! your voice still sounded so good...
So fresh...so tender...
and then we began...
a never ending conversation,
and my heart leapt.

My apprehensions fell flat,
my worries all gone.
We were still friends and shall forever be...

O!...you are so far
and yet,
so close..




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writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 8:36 pm:
That was really good. Very fun and interesting to read. I liked the sentence our tounges were locked, and our minds are blocked good work, keep it up. Could you check out my work? thanks :)
 
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