So far...but so close!

November 1, 2009
By Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
Shailja GOLD, Patna, Other
13 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
The fear of rejection is worse than rejection itself ~ Nora Profit

We were friends, the best ones,
when you left the town to live far away,
so far, so distant,
our friendship would break,
i was afraid.
We wrote letters, we kept calling,
yet, i was frightened,
gone was our intimacy.
Alas!...i lost another great friend.

After years, ages it seemed,
we met, we could not speak.
Our tongues were locked,
and our minds blocked.
There was so much to say,
but nothing came out.
staring so blankly,
feeling so shaky...we just looked...

Then you spoke..
Ah! your voice still sounded so good...
So tender...
and then we began...
a never ending conversation,
and my heart leapt.

My apprehensions fell flat,
my worries all gone.
We were still friends and shall forever be...

O! are so far
and yet,
so close..

The author's comments:
this piece was written very the letter of that friend lay open in front of my eyes...bringing back to my memory...all the special moments we have shared....

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on Jul. 30 2010 at 8:36 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
11 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase."

That was really good. Very fun and interesting to read. I liked the sentence our tounges were locked, and our minds are blocked good work, keep it up. Could you check out my work? thanks :)

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