November 2, 2009
By , Montgomery, PA
Tired of crying
Tired of tears
Bad things are happening
And doesn't no one care.
I'm tired of living in fear
Fear that anything I get Close to will get taken away
I don't get close to anything
Because it seems like it goes the next day
S I just pray and pray
Hoping things will change
Prayers don't seem to get answered
So I ask God why did you put me here anyway?
I just wish I could Go today!
This world is so crazy
It ain't no game
I'm really in a lot of pain.
Everybody shooting, killing people
I'm stating to go insaine.
All they're trying to do is get equal
But what's that going to slove
Because bullets don't have no name.
I'm just so tired
Of living
I'm so stressed
It feels like I'm dying.
Hair falling out
Weight going down
This is so crazy
It ain't supposed to be like this
Why is this happening to me?
I'm tierd of living with
This s***.
I'm tired.

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ilovetinkerbell said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:32 am
i loved your poem. I can relate to this because of things that have and still are happening in my life. I wish some of the things the poem says. great job and keep up the good work.
p.s. the people who love you are always there to help you. including all those who have replied to you post. Don't be afraid. just get close and you will see that it is okay. believe me, I was like that once but then I tryed and understood and I am no longer afraid. Good Luck
Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 11:09 am
i can totally relate to your poem. life is really hard! your poem is really good! great job!~
could you check out some of my poems, i would really like feedback~ Thnx :) having input by sum1 this good would be GREAT! good job
panda0434 said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 9:03 pm
this is great u nailed what it feels like for me... could u check out my mask it is me? i wrote it and would like some input... thnxz. :) ps it really is good. :)
lemon said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 1:59 pm
i can relate
kpf1991 said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:11 pm
Hey could you check out "anguish" or "They see through me" and rate it or just let know what you think? you have great talent and i'd really appreciate your input
AnniTheBeast! replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 5:54 pm
i will go with you and that you have a good talent but by tellling people that you could rub off as egotistical
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