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Not Phased At All (you can't see the tears i hide)

October 30, 2009
By b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
79 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never really know what love is, until it breaks your heart.


Left behind,
And forgotten
Split open,
To the core
Not understanding
A graspless concept
As closes
And open appears another door
As you cry
I hold in the pain
Trying to be strong, I
Feel no more, I
Feel nothing
The past,
Has heardened my soul,
But my heart is just as soft
As it was, before
I am not affected
At all,
By your words
No emotion shown,
Yet, on the inside
I am in knots
I am screaming
I am crying
But no one
Could ever know



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on Jan. 24 2010 at 11:32 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Very pretty and heartfelt.

Keep writing hun

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 5:35 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

i know how u feel i thought i could trust this one person with my personal stuff but she betrayed me as well

b.rai DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 13 2009 at 10:23 pm
b.rai DIAMOND, College Station, Texas
79 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never really know what love is, until it breaks your heart.

this one was about my ex-best friend.she was the closest i have been to any of my friends.we closer than anything..but she betrayed me.my bf cheated on me with her.i was more hurt by her than him.she said if i was a 'real' friend i would have forgiven her.and i told her if she was a 'real' friend she never would have done it.and she tried to put all the blame of their actions on me.we are speaking terms now it took about a year.but i wont ever be close to her again.soem ppl just take advantage of your trust too much..

tgir85 GOLD said...
on Dec. 9 2009 at 7:17 pm
tgir85 GOLD, Katy, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I only put you through that test to see if you would keep the faith or give up..."

you NEED to publish these!!! i mainly write stories but have written multiple poems(havent been able to put them on here yet though...)