Our words are stronger than we ever were

October 30, 2009
By mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
13 articles 45 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just be yourself, because life's to short to be anybody else" :) - Step Up 2 The Streets :) ♥


There words hit me in the chest
and make me loose my breath
Everything had changed so quickly between us three
I felt we were strong
Now I know you were never who I thought you were
I'd lie to myself again each day
That you were my friends and you wouldn't, couldn't run away
I kept back what I knew
because I wanted our friendship to be true
Words, tangled, on the screen
My mouth drops as I read whats so mean
I try to swollow but I cant
because I know its over,
Us three, we could never have part
But I suppose what or who you dont know, you cant miss.


The author's comments:
I poem, just a quick one, about a fight, which should never had happened.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 5 comments.


mai..... GOLD said...
on Aug. 12 2010 at 3:23 am
mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
13 articles 45 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just be yourself, because life's to short to be anybody else" :) - Step Up 2 The Streets :) ♥

Aww. Thanks bkcrider92 (: I appreciate your comment. (: I will deffinetly check out your work (:

on May. 20 2010 at 10:52 am
bkcrider92 GOLD, Roslyn Harbor, New York
10 articles 0 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace.”

I really like this! I know how you feel and getting let down by someone you thought was your friend is horrible =( If you could can u check out my poem Memories and comment and rate it? =)

on Dec. 14 2009 at 2:26 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
np (: if you have time, come check out my poetry too, kays?

mai..... GOLD said...
on Dec. 14 2009 at 1:51 am
mai..... GOLD, Deloraine, Other
13 articles 45 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just be yourself, because life's to short to be anybody else" :) - Step Up 2 The Streets :) ♥

Wow thankyou so much! Absoloutly love getting feedback :) Lovely to hear from you!

on Dec. 11 2009 at 4:08 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
Hey, great poem! It's simple and quick but sums it all up nicely. I love how you described the fight.

I really like your photos too. I tried commenting on a few of them but it wouldn't work, for some reason. But I really like the one with the boats, how they were all lined up in the centre of your photo, nicely set (:




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!