Our words are stronger than we ever were

October 30, 2009
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There words hit me in the chest
and make me loose my breath
Everything had changed so quickly between us three
I felt we were strong
Now I know you were never who I thought you were
I'd lie to myself again each day
That you were my friends and you wouldn't, couldn't run away
I kept back what I knew
because I wanted our friendship to be true
Words, tangled, on the screen
My mouth drops as I read whats so mean
I try to swollow but I cant
because I know its over,
Us three, we could never have part
But I suppose what or who you dont know, you cant miss.

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bkcrider92 said...
May 20, 2010 at 10:52 am
I really like this! I know how you feel and getting let down by someone you thought was your friend is horrible =( If you could can u check out my poem Memories and comment and rate it? =)
Maigz.xx replied...
Aug. 12, 2010 at 3:23 am
Aww. Thanks bkcrider92 (: I appreciate your comment. (: I will deffinetly check out your work (:
SilverDawn said...
Dec. 11, 2009 at 4:08 am
Hey, great poem! It's simple and quick but sums it all up nicely. I love how you described the fight.
I really like your photos too. I tried commenting on a few of them but it wouldn't work, for some reason. But I really like the one with the boats, how they were all lined up in the centre of your photo, nicely set (:
Maigz.xx replied...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 1:51 am
Wow thankyou so much! Absoloutly love getting feedback :) Lovely to hear from you!
SilverDawn replied...
Dec. 14, 2009 at 2:26 am
np (: if you have time, come check out my poetry too, kays?
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