Awesome day

October 29, 2009
By Anonymous

It was a nice summer day on an awesome vacation.
We were at Madeline Island in Minnesota
We were laughing and splashing.
And giving my doll a good time.

We put them in the sand that was as warm as hot chocolate
Let them go for a swim in water that was as clod as ice
“Oh no” where Polly pocket “I ask” as I see her floating away.
Luckily my brother and his friend were able to save her.

Now that I look back
I would have been ok with her going bye bye.
But I guess I thought she was cool back then.
It was an awesome day and I wont forget it.

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