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Rebirthed

Punctured through thin skinned slates,
as I wonder of my previous past.
Twisted throughout disgrace,
as my lost heart pulses alast.
An open mind unfolds,
as my imagery comes to cast,
A new being,
as a founded heart beats on a polished slate forever more.





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CletusTheCool said...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 5:08 pm
wow, beautiful.
cutting?
I don't know, that's what it reminds me of.
You really are an amazing writer
 
PoetLaureate07 said...
Feb. 25, 2010 at 10:46 pm
This is beautiful!!! I got a little confused for a minute there, but i figured it out!!! GORGEOUS!!!
 
calephchad replied...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 2:23 pm
Thank you!
 
MissFaber said...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 1:54 pm
wow.... you really versed the idea of tranformation very beautifully in this poem.
 
CuteCourt101 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 4, 2010 at 5:50 pm
beautiful .. really gets you thinking!!
5 Stars :)
 
calephchad replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 2:36 pm
Thank you oh so much!
 
Peace182 said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 11:06 am
This is great. I love it, simple yet very meaningful.
 
LeilaniLives said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 5:52 pm
I've fallen in love with your phrases and wording.
 
calephchad replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 3:01 pm
Thank you so much. You really encourage me to keep writing. ! This really means alot!
 
LeilaniLives replied...
Jan. 15, 2010 at 7:10 pm
:) Any and every time.
 
altindiegirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 7, 2009 at 8:32 am
This is so beautiful in its simplicity. "Punctured through thin skinned slates..." That's a great intro. Keep up the good work.
 
lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 10:41 pm
Beautiful. Deep. Strong. Words paint a picture.
 
Inkspired said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 8:40 pm
This is so powerful, the language just makes you think, and it is really deep! Beautiful!
 
calephchad replied...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 2:38 pm
This really means alot to me. I appreciate your positive thoughts.
 
firstsnowfalls This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 7:57 pm
beautiful and very powerful! great imagery! :)
 
Cheyenne said...
Nov. 19, 2009 at 6:22 pm
that poem is beautiful! It relates to me!
 
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