Tribute to Cody

October 29, 2009
By AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx


I love the way
you call back when I hang up.
I love the way
you wear your tank tops
inside-out.
I love the way your
eyes are red.
And I love the way
your skin is almost as pale as mine.
I love the fact you came from Birmingham,
because we can relate to so much.
I love your smell, your beautiful hair,
and your tender touch.
I love the way you tell me I'm beautiful even though I'm not.
I love the way
you let me cry
and I know you love me alot, alot.
I love your big dumb combat boots
and the way you wear your chains.
But, most of all I love you ,Cody, and
I hope you never change.



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on May. 20 2010 at 7:59 am
babyboo8810 PLATINUM, Omaha, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
live your life and never give up

this is very very good. i have a best friend name cody and this reminds me of him

 


on Mar. 3 2010 at 8:32 pm
PoetLaureate07 PLATINUM, Aberdeen, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to risk not being loved in return. To hope is to risk pain. To try is to risk failure, but the greatest hazard in life is to risk nothing..

this is really good!!!!! I can relate... I reckon us southern girls just know what to write about.... what's on our minds!!!Keep writing girl... I think we could be friends on here... =)

on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:40 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Aw that's really cute! Just sayin... :)

on Feb. 22 2010 at 11:09 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
11 articles 0 photos 1029 comments

Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

I wrote this for him when we were 12 for Valentines day. So yesh I have showed him.

on Feb. 21 2010 at 1:34 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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I really like how you can point out not only his attributes but also your own at the same time without being blunt about it. I mean you really have to read between the lines in this one and that's a pretty powerful thing. You can pinpoint your insecurities in a heartbreaking way and put the spotlight on his dorky little quirks that you love so much and I just think that is so powerful. Have you showed him this?

on Feb. 19 2010 at 7:06 am
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
22 articles 5 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

lovely, and very strong writing. will you use writing professionally? you need to. what you write is very touching

on Feb. 2 2010 at 4:38 pm
earthy_kat GOLD, Sebree, Kentucky
17 articles 1 photo 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My heart has joined the Thousand, for my friend stopped running today." - Hazel from the book Watership Down (by Richard Adams).

Very nice. Keep up the good work. :)

on Jan. 14 2010 at 6:37 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

This is too cuteeeeee. Love it.


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