Please, Don't Give Up on Me

October 29, 2009
By Warren_Uzumaki DIAMOND, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
Warren_Uzumaki DIAMOND, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
they say the mind bends and twists to deal with the horrors of life...
...some times the mind bends so much it snaps in two.

Love at first sight wastes less time


when you finally let go of your hold,
that's when I finally feel the cold,
life just sits there and laughs in my face,
as i start to hurt, start to sink in my place,
you give up on me and i want to cry'
i don't (give up on you), but fail now i feel like i want to die,
my meaning of life, my purpose is gone
memories flood, turn to pain, and blood is drawn
was every happy memory all in vain
was it pointless, or am i just going insane
everything seemed so damn perfect,
but with one break, i try to help and you reject
i will not repeat the past,
i will, i would, i can do anything so we can last
which is possible, you just have to want it
any mistakes are okay to flaunt
it's better to have little cracks you can see
than big ones hidden where none should be
i love you which is way more than worth its weight in gold
being with you can have more time as long as you keep your hold
a hold i'd never break
a risk i wish you'd never take

The author's comments:
i wrote this a day me and my girlfriend had a crash in our relationship

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on Jan. 16 2010 at 10:53 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Strong piece. I can see you really love this girl. Emotions are pulsating from every line. OUTSTANDING!

on Nov. 18 2009 at 5:02 pm
riotgirl1134 PLATINUM, Albrightsville, Pennsylvania
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Hey Warren!! I love the poem.


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