I Feel Your Draft

October 28, 2009
By sobel95 SILVER, Imperial Beach, California
sobel95 SILVER, Imperial Beach, California
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What did life do to you to make you like this?
Why do you brush off the world
As if it were one of the many people you ignore or treat coldly?
You hurt me.
Even though we are miles and miles apart
I still feel your cold draft blowing through my windows
Reminding me that you never cared

The author's comments:
Everyone has had a person like this in their life, I believe.

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on Nov. 12 2009 at 1:16 pm
BozzDiiva BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up anything is possible once you try!!!...

mii x treated me just like this he would cheat then deny it hurt me and act like he didnt care but i know he had to then like a year ago when he wasnt mii x he went to florida and never came back he dnt call write nuffing


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