October 27, 2009
As a petal falls,
A petal rosy red,
It falls to the ground,
And starts to make a bed.

A rosy red red petal,
As smooth as velvet,
It feels so soft,
As I touch it.

As the days goes on,
The petal shrivels up,
So I pick the rose,
And put it in a cup.

As I watch the rose,
I think of everything,
Like what I would do,
If I could sing.

But as I look,
I see a different red,
THe rose looks like,
It has bled.

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OliviaAnn said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 7:52 am
this is really well written!I really like the ending and how it keeps you thinking
Hallow said...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 10:54 am
I love the uplifting beginning of it. The ending twisting mood is good. Only thing that bothers me is the last line. I feel as though it's too short or something. I don't know, if it is good with you then that's wonderful.
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