poor frog

October 27, 2009
By wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
wheelit SILVER, Boyne, Michigan
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Fire
Fire
Fire
Glue
Gas and oil
Two sludge hammers
One pick axe
It went flying
I jumped back
Poor poor poor creature
It couldn’t move
But it was alive
So we made a pancake
That was one big piece of
Plywood?
Poor poor Froggy
I am sorry



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on Nov. 18 2009 at 3:00 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
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This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:09 pm
izz123 GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Interesting piece. I had to read it a few times to really grasp its meaning. I like how it's short and to the point, with limited language. This makes the important parts stand out clearly. The poem leaves me wondering what exactly happened. Very nice piece. Keep writing.


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