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Your lies were so beautiful,
they made me breakdown,
I was all your's,
my whole being in your hands.

You out me through a loop,
threw me in the air,
you said you'd catch me,
but you just walked away and let me fall.

why did you have to hurt me,
why was it so important,
why so necessary?

was it just too easy,
too much fun,
ws playing with me,
too easy to pass up?





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QuestionAuthority1128 said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 8:53 pm
This was a really good poem but you had some spelling and punctuation errors.
 
kit_kat said...
Nov. 13, 2009 at 3:40 pm
It's kinda sad, in a good way, if that makes sense. I like it, it's relatable and well-written.
 
kaseyparks said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 8:27 pm
cute, i can relate. well-written.
 
starsonmysleeves This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2009 at 1:11 am
i've felt this way so many times. i guess we all go through it. well expressed.
 
Hay_Wire This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 11, 2009 at 10:06 am
i like it. good metaphors
 
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