October 24, 2009
By srainwater BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
srainwater BRONZE, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
You've got to take the good with the bad, smile when you're sad. Love what you've got, and remember what you had. Always forgive, never forget. Learn from your mistakes, but never regret. People change and things go wrong, just remember life goes on.

A girl loved a boy,but he could never see.

How great she really was,or how beautiful she would be.

She told him how she felt,and he just stood there frozen.

She loved this boy so much,he just didn`t know it.

She told him that she loved him,but he had nothing to say.

The only thing that came to mind was one word,"ok."

She felt like she had been rejected,and felt she made a mistake.

Her heart had just been broken,it suddenly began to ache.

Now that she looks back,all she can do is laugh.

She never let him have her whole heart,she only gave him half.

The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was in the 8th grade. I THOUGHT that I was in love with my best friend, Nick.

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