October 24, 2009
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You Left the other day.
You thought it was best.
I heard the next day.
Why? You were so crazy,so fun.
You couldnt hear the sobs that you left behind.
You didnt see the destruction that followed.
You didnt see the tears streaming down so many faces
You didnt realize your influence.
You didnt wipe away tears and sit in silence.
You didnt show.
You werent there to sit and hear your dad break down.
You never saw the pain you caused.
If only you would have stuck around.
You didnt raise up others
You never saw the storm building until to late.
You didnt feel the hurt reverberating in the ground.
You didnt see the flood of tears that day.
If only you would have talked to someone.
You wouldnt have caused the silence that took over everones day.
The solemnity that flooded everyones hearts.
You werent there to lift up the hurt.
You dont even see the tears streeming down my face right now.

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Ally25 said...
May 25, 2010 at 5:05 pm
Your a good writter and honestly I think the poem itself should have gave a little backround info but over all it was good.
TaylorC replied...
May 25, 2010 at 6:25 pm
Thanks. And that is a good idea. I will have to add that to my new poems and rework this one.Thanks
TaylorC said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 5:01 pm
Please comment with your honest feedback. This is all of my pain from this tragedy put into a poem.
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