JJ <3 MAG

October 23, 2009
By RinaAnne GOLD, San Ramon, California
RinaAnne GOLD, San Ramon, California
15 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only easy day was yesterday.


Small heat – bursts of addiction –
translate touch to passion,
while breath delays, patience is carved into the soul.
a smile – recognition – slinks its way across both faces,
a lazy, lemon-flavored secret to be tucked away
for a night dream.
rain trickles down the classroom window as
his fingers curve, take root, draw circles against her palm.
her heart speeds, matching the rate of the hail outside.
if he's not meticulous with the way he holds her,
she'll shatter.


The author's comments:
inspired by JJ <3

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Angel_17 said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 5:29 pm
Angel_17, Tucson, Arizona
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This was great:) i loved the picture it painted in my head. Check out my stuff if you want:) good work!

on Jul. 1 2010 at 8:44 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

Good :) I'd love to see it.

RinaAnne GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2010 at 4:21 pm
RinaAnne GOLD, San Ramon, California
15 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
the only easy day was yesterday.

 thank you thank you! :) glad you all liked it. I kept it short for certain reasons - mainly personal. It's hard to write about this guy - he was my first true love, always will be. you know how it goes :P but I'm so glad you like it. I'll revise and add some more for you all!

on Jun. 9 2010 at 12:57 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

Lovely use of language.

Please, feel free to read/ comment my poetry as well. :)


on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:07 pm
sparkofheart GOLD, Plymouth, Minnesota
16 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always" - Severus Snape

that was fantastic you are an amazing writer...keep it up!

on May. 29 2010 at 7:02 pm
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

Go to submit work and submit your poetry; simple as that :)

Vaelyn BRONZE said...
on May. 28 2010 at 11:11 am
Vaelyn BRONZE, Spokane, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
A book can change your life, your point of views and/or your outlook on the world... but life changes too so keep reading and you'll grow in mind.

I DEFINITLY agree!!! You should TOTALLY add more too this poem, it has a good hook and draws you in for more.

on May. 28 2010 at 10:00 am
The_Girl_Next_Door PLATINUM, Elkins, Arkansas
32 articles 1 photo 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
~*The mind has but a thousand eyes, and the heart is left with one...Yet the light of a whole life dies the moment love is done.*~

I think you have a way with words.  You sound like you have a lot of talent, I only wish you had written more about it :/

You have talent; Don't forget it!


on May. 27 2010 at 6:56 pm
FireWhiskey SILVER, Durango, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreams are only Dreams, unless you do something about them, than they're life"
~By me

pretty good. I wish I new how to get my poetry posted on the site.


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