Live and Let Be

October 23, 2009
By Lyric81 SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
Lyric81 SILVER, Indianapolis, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 5 comments

I just want to weep
Through the night as I sleep
The tear drops will fall
I wish no wonder why they are
No idea to be exact
Just the struggle beneath the fact
To be naive, as who believed
That wolf who did achieve
Leaving me to be conceived; devoured to the bone
Pity to be accomplished is the tune of it all
It palys through my head all the day long
Although I'm not sure how it influenced me
I realize now that I have to live and let it be

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cree8ive GOLD said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 8:27 pm
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
16 articles 1 photo 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson

thanks for commenting on my work! i like this, but i think maybe you should try a looser rhyme scheme because this one sounds a little forced at times. over all very good though.


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