little thoughts

October 23, 2009
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Frozon ground chrunches beneath my feet. The sun is warm, but not warm enough to thaw the earth. The sky is shamlessly blue, not one cloud remains. My breath turns into little white clouds before my eyes. Words fill my head but I'am as empty as the sky.

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iliketac0s said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 7:09 pm
wow i really love this!!! :)
noelleism replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 3:33 pm
I'm so glad' and thanx.
Milo! said...
Mar. 31, 2010 at 6:26 pm
Wow. It’s impossible not to b in love with this. It’s truly amazing. It really captures the emotion you’re trying to convey. Keep writing, because I want to see more. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
noelleism replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 3:27 pm
It gives me immense pleasure to know that someone appriciates my art. Thanx 4 U'R comment. And I'd be happy to look at your art. :)
noelleism replied...
Apr. 20, 2010 at 3:36 pm
Umm, Milo, how do I read your stuff. What's your teen ink name?
Shahed said...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 4:03 pm
u know what i love about ur work.. its how u write about whatever it is that ur eye have cought.. open thing thou.. try writing longer stuff.. gr8 job!
noelleism replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 7:42 am
I know I've looked back at my work and I've seen that same thing, so now I'm fixin it. Thanx 4 th tip.
Shahed replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 3:55 pm
But you still do great! sometimes short stuff have so much meanings!
Check out my work ;)
noelleism replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 7:42 pm
Thanks!!! I will:)
Shahed replied...
Mar. 1, 2010 at 8:57 pm
and ur very welcome
noelleism replied...
Mar. 3, 2010 at 9:27 am
Well I've read every thing you've got, and I'll continue to read your future work. :)
Shahed replied...
Mar. 4, 2010 at 4:50 pm
Sounds great!
noelleism replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:07 pm
I do, but this is one of my first poems. I was still getting the hang of it.
Shahed replied...
Mar. 30, 2010 at 6:10 pm

Its still as good!

I enjoy reading your work!

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