Quiet

October 22, 2009
By HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
9 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you gotta be cruel to be kind.
No risk, no reward


im tired of your memories
lets stay here in reality
you keep speeking words to me
really, im not listening
i burn alive from every word
deep fried, so crispy, like the bird
that cannot ever fly away
i dont want to be forced to stay
hating every word you say
getting hotter every day
not going to hurt you- im provoking
will i save you?- leave you choking
silly feet anger wells doing a dance
and it will not give you a chance
the horror, humor, and romance
is as tired as the dog that profusely pants
i need you to hush before my anger is topped
if i get my hands on you
forever you'll stop.






-YK



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arnezyall said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:38 pm
dawg dis was too hott. Funni too. I kno it aint meant to be but i c humor n lmost anythang. but dis was fyye. imma go c sum mo. deuces.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:35 pm
sounds pretty personal this article. But it is really good. I love it! Im going to read moreof your articles now...

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 6:56 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Screwed down for life." ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

haha, ok, good that I know now...

on Dec. 27 2009 at 5:13 pm
HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
9 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you gotta be cruel to be kind.
No risk, no reward

lol... no one broke my heart in these. i guess if im angry i cant really control what i write and how i write it. on the outside nobody knows how i feel inside or about teenink. I didn't mean for the poems to sound the same, just to rhyme. lol. do not be concerned.

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 25 2009 at 9:38 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Screwed down for life." ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

What happened? Did someone break your heart? Both your poems involve the same idea...lets talk.


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