The Lord Said to Me

October 22, 2009
While asking for forgiveness
the Lord said to me
"you will not be forgived
untill you set your memory free."
Not knowing how to respond
or understanding what he had said
the Lord said to me
"go on, look through your head."
so i took a step
way back through time
watching everything i did
and hearing every line.
the things i saw
i could not believe
the things i heard
made me want to leave.
as i got back
from my memory alone
the Lord said to me
"are you ready to go home?"
i nodded my head
as i couldnt believe my eyes
and then the Lord said to me
"i think its time to apologize."

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reg93 said...
Aug. 26, 2011 at 6:21 pm
I read this over and over! you are so amazing!!
Avalon,Liv said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 12:15 am
im a big fan of your work!
ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 2:07 pm

WOW ! You know , your a really good poet ? This is amazing . Im a fan :)


isabel18 said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:13 pm
This was really touching! Great work!
mrmonkeyman69 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 12:53 pm
this poam is awsome i cryed
unbreakable replied...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 12:56 pm
thank is one of my favorite
bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:28 pm
This poem gave me are extremely talented...I love your poems!
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