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The Most Happiest Thing

I can hear the birds
sing their morning song
I could lay out here
until dusk comes along.
As I watch the river
flow over the sand
I remember the day
when someone else was by my hand.
He took me through the trees
and he showed me this place
the most beautiful sight
that you could hardly replace.
It was his soul
of my father my dad
the most happiest thing
a daughter could ever have.



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Avalon,Liv said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 12:13 am:
this is aswell one of my favorites
 
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sunnyhunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 8:13 pm:
Great poem.  Very deep and beautiful.
 
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isabel18 said...
May 21, 2010 at 1:10 pm:

OMG! My name is Mariah!

Great poem by the way! It was really sweet!

 
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mrmonkeyman69 said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 12:59 pm:
this is another great poam love it. see u at school brittny
 
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mariah said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 1:51 pm:
Wow, this is a great poem brittany : )
 
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