Don't Blink

October 26, 2009
By Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)


Life goes by too quickly
Never let it slip away
If you love someone, tell them
Don’t be afraid to let your emotions free
Your eyes sparkle like diamonds
Don’t blink, or everything will change
Be afraid of nothing
Love everything
You caught me by the hand
Having a never ending grip
Don’t blink
Things change to sad
I used to shed tears of joy,
Now I just shed tears
Don’t blink,
Or all your tears will fall . . . .



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on Jun. 30 2010 at 11:18 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thanks for the feed back!

i have more poems, if you could please check them out

and i just wrote a new 1, but waiting 4 approval


on Jun. 30 2010 at 9:55 am
It's so funny 'cause I'm Made Of Wax Larry, What Are You Made Of - ADTR came on when I was reading this. But, it's good! Keep writing.*

on Jan. 28 2010 at 5:21 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thanks!!! i really appreciate the feed back~

thank you very much!

i will differently check out ur work!

Jacee007 GOLD said...
on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:51 pm
Jacee007 GOLD, Westland, Michigan
13 articles 6 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Today is the Tomorrow you were worrying about Yesterday. The journey of a lifetime begins with one single step. Negativity is the downfall of dreams. It's not the quantity of friends that matters it's the quality.

So sweet n so true:)

n may I say vry well written:)

Check out my stuff sometime plz

on Jan. 9 2010 at 3:06 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

poems about love are really awesome!!! thats all that my poems are about. i will definetly chek them out!! (:

on Jan. 8 2010 at 2:47 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Hey my poems, Believe, Perfectly Paired, and A Thousand Miles were just posted you should check them out:) i think u'll rly like the perfectly paired n a thousand miles one cuz it's about love<3

on Dec. 4 2009 at 9:57 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

THANK U so much!!! i have sum poems, and i culd really use the feedback!

on Dec. 4 2009 at 8:47 pm
Titan12339 SILVER, Bellbrook, Ohio
7 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I dwell in chaos, for love is madness." Jason Storm, son of Chaos god of darkness and madness In a Camp Half Blood RP.

Nice poem, has so many truths to it, i'll check out your other poems as well =)

on Nov. 21 2009 at 10:24 am
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

can you check out another 1 of my poems called 'Mile a Minute' I culd really use the feedback

Joyful_angel said...
on Nov. 21 2009 at 10:22 am
THANK YOU!!! I APPRECIATE THE FEEDBACK!!!

on Nov. 21 2009 at 10:08 am
ElijahN PLATINUM, Livonia, Michigan
31 articles 0 photos 150 comments

Favorite Quote:
"only after you've lost everything, that you're free to do anything."-Tyler Durdan -Fight Club-

Very good, emotional. :)

on Nov. 20 2009 at 7:46 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thank you so much!! i am glad you enjoyed it, do u think you can cmnt on my other poem calld "Mile a Minute"????

on Nov. 20 2009 at 1:09 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Great poem! Nice flow

on Nov. 18 2009 at 7:02 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

can you check out my poem called "Mile a Minute"... i would really like to have feedback on the poem.. .thanx so much!! :)

on Nov. 16 2009 at 5:29 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thank you, can you check out another 1 of my poems called mile a minute, it mite be published undr anymous, but it is mine. i cul rlly use the feedback, and i will definetly keep writtin!!! :) THNX~

on Nov. 15 2009 at 4:31 pm
EternalSunshine GOLD, High Bridge, New Jersey
14 articles 9 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Happiness is when what you think, what you say, and what you do are in harmony." - Mahatma Gandhi

this is good! keep writing:)

on Nov. 14 2009 at 7:33 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

thank you so much 4 cmnting on my poem, the feed bak rlly helps!

i will keep writing. i have another poem called "Mile a Minute" if you culd check it out and let me kno how that 1 is... THNX so much

on Nov. 14 2009 at 1:06 pm
StephenieReneeBaker SILVER, Colorado, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't promise my forever when your just going to break my heart.

That was a realy good poem, keep writing your amazing!

on Nov. 14 2009 at 12:43 pm
**alwaysbeme** BRONZE, Valparaiso, Indiana
1 article 0 photos 27 comments
That was very good and true you're a great writter i really liked the way you ened it :)

keep it up :)

on Nov. 4 2009 at 11:22 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet"
"The past is the past, and i am your futuer." (<3<3<3<3<3)

beginer @ poetry..hope its ok


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