Don't Blink

October 26, 2009
Life goes by too quickly
Never let it slip away
If you love someone, tell them
Don’t be afraid to let your emotions free
Your eyes sparkle like diamonds
Don’t blink, or everything will change
Be afraid of nothing
Love everything
You caught me by the hand
Having a never ending grip
Don’t blink
Things change to sad
I used to shed tears of joy,
Now I just shed tears
Don’t blink,
Or all your tears will fall . . . .

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danielalovesmexico said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 9:55 am
It's so funny 'cause I'm Made Of Wax Larry, What Are You Made Of - ADTR came on when I was reading this. But, it's good! Keep writing.*
Joyful_angel replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 11:18 am

thanks for the feed back!

i have more poems, if you could please check them out

and i just wrote a new 1, but waiting 4 approval

Jacee007 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:51 pm
So sweet n so true:)
n may I say vry well written:)
Check out my stuff sometime plz
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 5:21 pm
thanks!!! i really appreciate the feed back~
thank you very much!
i will differently check out ur work!
bluemagnet22 said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 2:47 pm
Hey my poems, Believe, Perfectly Paired, and A Thousand Miles were just posted you should check them out:) i think u'll rly like the perfectly paired n a thousand miles one cuz it's about love<3
Joyful_angel replied...
Jan. 9, 2010 at 3:06 pm
poems about love are really awesome!!! thats all that my poems are about. i will definetly chek them out!! (:
Titan12339 said...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 8:47 pm
Nice poem, has so many truths to it, i'll check out your other poems as well =)
Joyful_angel replied...
Dec. 4, 2009 at 9:57 pm
THANK U so much!!! i have sum poems, and i culd really use the feedback!
ElijahNoble said...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 10:08 am
Very good, emotional. :)
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 10:22 am
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 21, 2009 at 10:24 am
can you check out another 1 of my poems called 'Mile a Minute' I culd really use the feedback
bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 1:09 pm
Great poem! Nice flow
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 7:46 pm
thank you so much!! i am glad you enjoyed it, do u think you can cmnt on my other poem calld "Mile a Minute"????
Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 18, 2009 at 7:02 pm
can you check out my poem called "Mile a Minute"... i would really like to have feedback on the poem.. .thanx so much!! :)
EternalSunshine said...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 4:31 pm
this is good! keep writing:)
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 5:29 pm
thank you, can you check out another 1 of my poems called mile a minute, it mite be published undr anymous, but it is mine. i cul rlly use the feedback, and i will definetly keep writtin!!! :) THNX~
Joyful_angel said...
Nov. 4, 2009 at 11:22 pm
beginer @ poetry..hope its ok
**alwaysbeme** replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 12:43 pm
That was very good and true you're a great writter i really liked the way you ened it :)
keep it up :)
!!!JuSt~Me!!! replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 1:06 pm
That was a realy good poem, keep writing your amazing!
Joyful_angel replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 7:33 pm
thank you so much 4 cmnting on my poem, the feed bak rlly helps!
i will keep writing. i have another poem called "Mile a Minute" if you culd check it out and let me kno how that 1 is... THNX so much
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