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Freezing Water

October 26, 2009
By AngelaRose12 BRONZE, Jerome, Pennsylvania
AngelaRose12 BRONZE, Jerome, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment. By: Buddha


Do you remember? I do.
It was a day in September,
A Sunday afternoon.
The screaming, the yelling,
The Ice cold water
Surrounding our bodies,
The burst of shock,
Running thru our veins,
The pierce numbing sound,
In my ears hearing him scream,
While he’s jumping off the bridge.
The sight of not seeing him come back up.
Swimming in after him,
Hitting him on the head with my hand.
Us coming up for air,
Not doing so good,
From laughing at our stupid selves in 40 º water.


The author's comments:
This poem was about my boyfriend and I jumping into a river while the water is freezing. We were so bored. After that happend I felt like writing about it because I wanted to remember a very specail moment in my life.

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