October 26, 2009
By ElyzrElectrify BRONZE, Alliance, Ohio
ElyzrElectrify BRONZE, Alliance, Ohio
4 articles 1 photo 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Real eyes realize real lies."

"If you love two people, choose the second. Because if you loved the first, you wouldn't have fallen in love with the second"
--Johnny Depp

Like rain, they fall from her eyes.
She is a cloud that is over saturated.
It's coming now,
I hear the thunder roll.
Now the lightning flashes,
"Boom! Crack!"
a tree splits.
The tornado touches down.
The raging winds,
ripping up trees from their place.
The rain starts.
It is falling.
Faster and faster every minute!
Now she explodes.
Her emotions have taken over.

The author's comments:
i was really upset and a friend refered to me as a cloud.
i grabbed piece of paper and a pen and this came out.
i wrote it in under 5 minutes.

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