Tame the Wild Vine

October 22, 2009
By phoenix48 SILVER, Houston, Texas
phoenix48 SILVER, Houston, Texas
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The lily flower is a calming thing.
It sits in the water and you never notice.
It brings with it love, joy and bliss.
When it’s gone you still think about it.
I am the lily flower
I’m there, standing and sitting,
And you don’t notice.
When I’m around I bring care, jubilance, and tranquility.
When I’m gone you still think about me.
This is only what I hear from others.
I see myself as nothing but wild,
Growing all over the place.
Never still.
I climb and climb.
People chop me down,
But then I grow in another direction.
Never stopping, never staying still.
Some might see this as an inspiring thing,
But what do you see when you look at a vine?
Lots and lots of confusion,
Knots that will never untangle,
Weaving and unweaving,
Never stopping never staying still.
You cut me down, but keep on growing
In another direction.
You can never tell where a vine will end up,
It is untamable.
I need to be tamed.


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on Jan. 29 2010 at 4:59 pm
phoenix48 SILVER, Houston, Texas
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okay i know wat you guys r talking about...this was the first poem i wrote for creative writing....actually all my poems till now were 4 creative writing...but just so u know some of these aren't about me. i write wat i see and feel is important to bring to light. this particular is wbout me though...just keep in mind it was my first one

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on Nov. 2 2009 at 8:09 pm
archon GOLD, Mandeville, Louisiana
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another great poem, you could do a little more to make words flow better but that just comes with time. good work!

on Nov. 1 2009 at 4:08 pm
Inkspired PLATINUM, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"If one will scoff at the study of language, how, save in terms of language, will one scoff?" - Mario Pei
"I write for the same reason I breathe - because if I didn't, I would die." Isaac Asimov

This is great, needs a bit of editing on word choice and flow, but otherwise expresses your emotions really well, and is a really original way of describing yourself!

on Oct. 30 2009 at 12:16 pm
i liked how you combined yourself into the peom.

you have a very creating writting style.

keep writting.

your very good.

on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:14 am
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
This poem has great flow and insight.
I really enjoyed it.
Lovely poem darling =]
-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-
XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem is a very good desrciption of an emotion, but I do not know which one, I wish tha twould have been explained. some of my poems are not very explaintory and not even I myself know what they mean, but other than that this is a great poem. =]


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