An Orchestra

Just how I like my poems, darkly beautiful. meaningful

really great poem :) keep writing, Mel. Check out my stuff if you would like

OMGGG! I loved this(: its very insightful and it blew me away.
also, thank you for checking out my stuff too, i acually put up alot better stuff but it hasn't been acceptted yet :/

I agree with the others. Nice poem.

I really like this poem. it has a nice flow to it =D

i really like this one, very raw and gets the whole point across

I really like this poem. It has so much emotion. I especially like the lines The blade dances/Over poercelain skin. I also like the repetition which brings emphasis to the theme of the poem

This is really great, it paints a picture really well. I love how you use repetition to get your point across!

I like this, it has feeling and a story to it.

This is really pretty. This reminds me of the article I have to do in journalism class; about domestic violence.

This is sad but it opens my eyes. I see what you are going through and my heart pittys for you. Poems are an excelent way to express your self and by you writing this poem you express your self very clearly.

This poem really paints a picture in my head on how you feel about this and what your experiencing. This is a great peice of work that i am sure alot of people can relate to. I like how you named all the times that it has happened and exactly what it sounds like to you. I like how you compared this to music and how you hate it.

this is a very powerful and emotional poem. but PLEASE, if something like this is going on, you need to get to a safe place.

This poem is so awesome....I can really hear and feel what you are trying to so. Do not change it!

I don't think I can even explain how beautiful this poem is. It's perfect.

This is a beautiful poem!!! So many kids have parents that are in abusive relationships. i myself had to deal with many. cutting yourself is a resort that many teens are looking toward. This is a beautiful description of a cutters inner emotions and writings like tthis one are the ones that will open manys eyes toward this epidimic that is hitting are nation so quietly.