Just You

October 22, 2009
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Do you remember
When it's just you and me.
No one else
as far as I see.
Our eyes meet,
I swear it's so real,
By all the moments
and the way you make me feel.
Your eyes like the twilight sky,
Makes me feel so alive.
Wish we could take that chance and fly.
Do you remember
When it’s just you and me.
My heart begins to race,
Doodling hearts I begin to trace.
You don't say anything,
Nothing at all.
Just one look,
And I begin to fall.
We’re so innocent
With everything we do,
Wanting this to be more than true.
Being with you is like a dream,
Much more than it really seems.
I want
To give you my heart
To give you the ability
To break it all apart.
Catch me…
I cannot do it alone,
Without you
It’s a cyclone.
Think of me,
As if I'm the one,
There's nothing left
When the stories done.
Make this…
Your fairytale ending,
We’re not little anymore
So let’s stop pretending.

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Avalynn said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 8:35 pm
i can totally relate this! thanks for writing, its a great poem and i especially like the last 2 lines...
"We're not little anymore
so lets stop pretending."
nice job! (can you please check out my poem called Crescendo in about a week or so? thank you :)
cutelilpoet01 said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 1:02 pm
I love this poem and the story it tells!
Paig3Cagl3 said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 2:56 pm
I love the emotion and the image you have portrayed here.
-Please read the writhings I have posted on here I think you would really enjoy them =]
alex9426 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 4:38 pm
this is awesome. i luv the emotion and the passion you put in the poem. hope to see more from you!
WootSaba replied...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 1:46 pm
Wow, this was amazing. You put my poems to shame. Good job.
akrr2011 said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 9:17 am
I absolutly love it <3
Exactaly what i needed to help me get through a tough time right now.
Thank you,
Keep writing.
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