Walking Alone

October 22, 2009
Where do I go without you, where do I go without you
That coming into this world, nothing then
I wanted ever after desiring you Without you
How will you stay separate from me
The walls will break hearing my call
You will have to come for me, my companion of the lonely roads
Where do I go without you

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Andreeka said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 10:18 am
i Really Like Thiss:)
Hayz~Hardcore said...
Nov. 1, 2009 at 9:25 pm
I absolutly loved this poem....i can feel the desperation for the one you love! it was magnificint and not confusing at all to me. If its not to much trouble could u pls check out some of my work and let me know wat u think pls and thank you. Oh and keep it up ur an awesome writer
Annika said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:52 pm
very nice. i like i like. confusing yes but thats what draws the readers in. continue onward fellow writer! i shall read more.
ColeN.Kuznia said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 11:00 am
The piece was somewhat confusing atfirst; which was good, by the way. Because it held me in to take a closer look, and I feel as if I have my own understanding and interpitation of your piece which makes it truely beautiful to the reader. All in all the piece was sensational; and I myself can take a different look on things under that perspective. So thank you =]
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