Poem for a Lost Soul

October 22, 2009
By CrystalClosure GOLD, Hudsonville, Michigan
CrystalClosure GOLD, Hudsonville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"We are all like snowfakes, beautiful and fragile. Though our purpose is simple and our lives are short, we shall make the most of what we have been given."
~Myself~


Shiver, Shiver in the cold as the frost falls around you,
Like knifes that stab inside your heart,
Fall in the snow that dances around your frozen hands,
As cold as ice your soul's delite is to be reconized,
Like a twisted lulaby that teaches to live again after we die,
Love another they told me, but all we want to do is make them cry,
My iced over vision is killing my intuition.
As I feel my very last hour I look up to see the snowflakes fall like flowers,
After a proformance of a lifetime, take a bow, leave the stage, then run from the emotions that you cage.
In the night I'm falling for you, in the day I'm running from you.
Let's not forget why we regret eachother.
The choices we made tell us that we were never ment to be,
you and me.


The author's comments:
This is going to be a very important poem in Crysal to My Throat.

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on Dec. 8 2009 at 8:45 am
silver_tear_drops GOLD, Muskegon, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
one day you might see all the pain you brought me and how i loved you still ~Faith Frye~

omg i love this one too i rele love your work

on Nov. 6 2009 at 5:51 pm
CrystalClosure GOLD, Hudsonville, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are all like snowfakes, beautiful and fragile. Though our purpose is simple and our lives are short, we shall make the most of what we have been given."
~Myself~

Thanks, personally i am a little darker than normal but im ok with that!

on Nov. 6 2009 at 5:50 pm
CrystalClosure GOLD, Hudsonville, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We are all like snowfakes, beautiful and fragile. Though our purpose is simple and our lives are short, we shall make the most of what we have been given."
~Myself~

Thanks so much. all my poems come from my heart and I always try to put my emotions in them

drty.monkey said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:18 am
wow, this poem is amazing. as much as i have written i don't think any of my poems compare to this, it is great. it really makes me feel, your wording couldnt be better, and the way you tell the story.. its just amazing. please, keep writing.

on Oct. 31 2009 at 2:45 pm
Gabrielle SILVER, Galesburg, Illinois
8 articles 2 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be nobody but myself -- in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else -- means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight, and never stop fighting." -E.E Cummings

I really love this poem. It has such a dark tone behind it and its very powerful. Good work, keep it up.

ccxisleet GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:12 am
ccxisleet GOLD, Big Lake, Minnesota
15 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To be one's self, is to be truly honest, truly loyal, and truly great."

One of the most deep and emotional pieces I've read. You definately got your message accross to me the reader; and most importantly I felt relation and caught a glimpse of a possible feeling you may be feeling... Good job; I loved it.


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