Poem for a Lost Soul

October 22, 2009
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Shiver, Shiver in the cold as the frost falls around you,
Like knifes that stab inside your heart,
Fall in the snow that dances around your frozen hands,
As cold as ice your soul's delite is to be reconized,
Like a twisted lulaby that teaches to live again after we die,
Love another they told me, but all we want to do is make them cry,
My iced over vision is killing my intuition.
As I feel my very last hour I look up to see the snowflakes fall like flowers,
After a proformance of a lifetime, take a bow, leave the stage, then run from the emotions that you cage.
In the night I'm falling for you, in the day I'm running from you.
Let's not forget why we regret eachother.
The choices we made tell us that we were never ment to be,
you and me.

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silver_tear_drops said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 8:45 am
omg i love this one too i rele love your work
drty.monkey said...
Nov. 2, 2009 at 11:18 am
wow, this poem is amazing. as much as i have written i don't think any of my poems compare to this, it is great. it really makes me feel, your wording couldnt be better, and the way you tell the story.. its just amazing. please, keep writing.
Snowflakes-in-My-Tears replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 5:50 pm
Thanks so much. all my poems come from my heart and I always try to put my emotions in them
DisortientedIdentity said...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 2:45 pm
I really love this poem. It has such a dark tone behind it and its very powerful. Good work, keep it up.
Snowflakes-in-My-Tears replied...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 5:51 pm
Thanks, personally i am a little darker than normal but im ok with that!
ColeN.Kuznia said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 11:12 am
One of the most deep and emotional pieces I've read. You definately got your message accross to me the reader; and most importantly I felt relation and caught a glimpse of a possible feeling you may be feeling... Good job; I loved it.
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