Teardrops

October 21, 2009
By rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"


Teardrops are falling off of her soft white cheek. The hurt she feels cuts so so deep. She just wants to quit. Why should she try? Could she possibly cry anymore? As she is pressed against the cold hard floor? She cant find a good reason to deep breathing. Not while she watches her dads car as its leaving. The pain is suffocating her. She knows things will never be as they were. All she can do now is sit and stare, stare at the picture as it lays there. It is her and her dad. O how she misses the fun they once had. But its all over now.


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on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:48 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

yes! of coarse i will look at your stuff =D

on Jan. 23 2010 at 8:47 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

im so sorry to hear that =(

on Jan. 19 2010 at 3:32 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I feel your emotions in this. Beautiful.

Tifini SILVER said...
on Nov. 23 2009 at 8:15 am
Tifini SILVER, Danbury, Texas
6 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don’t say you love me unless you really mean it, because I might do something crazy like believe it.
~Crush

Live as if your were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever. ~ Gandhiji

Wow, i can relate to the deep fellings in this poem. My father is being just as difficult and i feel him slipping away as well

on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:40 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

that wasent a compliment :P lol jk

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 4:15 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

....thanks

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:38 am
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

mmhm. :) ____________ (i love underscores. lol)

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:24 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

please see my poems? pretty please? they are like...on pg. 2,845 and NO ONE READS THEM CAUSE THEY ARE SO FAR DEEP IN.

Fayrouz SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2009 at 8:23 pm
Fayrouz SILVER, Fargo, North Dakota
9 articles 12 photos 364 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Only dead fish swim with the stream"

sorry to have agressive comments..it is my nature! when i read this i remembered the quote "home is where the heart is"...but when your heart is split in two, could home possibly be the same?

don't have to take it!

IT IS YOUR POEM. not mine.

on Nov. 14 2009 at 7:00 pm
Brianna Taylor BRONZE, Stockton, California
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I lIKE IT .

on Nov. 6 2009 at 1:10 pm
CASTROLmatt GOLD, Coolidge, Arizona
14 articles 11 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes you have to take life less seriously to get where you want to be."

Good stuff. It is deep.

Write on.

on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:32 am
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

lol, well maybe i do have a little bit of a life :)

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 30 2009 at 9:51 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

lol. we both know thats not true

on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:01 pm
EHunt96 PLATINUM, Swampscott, Massachusetts
32 articles 0 photos 215 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about."

I love this, this makes a great connection between a girl and her dad. Keep up the good work! ;)

on Oct. 30 2009 at 4:12 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

what can i say...i have no life ;) lol

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 8:00 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

you talk online a lot!!! lol

on Oct. 28 2009 at 4:19 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

haha, :D :P

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:46 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

haha, no problem.

and i won't. lol :)

on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:44 pm
rAinDroPsdRip SILVER, Fairfield, Ohio
6 articles 0 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"never give up on something you cant go a day withouth thinking about\\\" \\\"carpe diem\\\"

thanks a bunch :D

im not usually that deep....dont get used to it lol ;)

-Kal- GOLD said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 3:35 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
14 articles 0 photos 244 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

this was deep hannah. good article though :)


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