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Teardrops

Teardrops are falling off of her soft white cheek. The hurt she feels cuts so so deep. She just wants to quit. Why should she try? Could she possibly cry anymore? As she is pressed against the cold hard floor? She cant find a good reason to deep breathing. Not while she watches her dads car as its leaving. The pain is suffocating her. She knows things will never be as they were. All she can do now is sit and stare, stare at the picture as it lays there. It is her and her dad. O how she misses the fun they once had. But its all over now.



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ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 3:32 pm
I feel your emotions in this. Beautiful.
 
Tifini said...
Nov. 23, 2009 at 8:15 am
Wow, i can relate to the deep fellings in this poem. My father is being just as difficult and i feel him slipping away as well
 
Hannahbear<3 replied...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 8:47 am
im so sorry to hear that =(
 
Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 8:24 pm
please see my poems? pretty please? they are like...on pg. 2,845 and NO ONE READS THEM CAUSE THEY ARE SO FAR DEEP IN.
 
Hannahbear<3 replied...
Jan. 23, 2010 at 8:48 am
yes! of coarse i will look at your stuff =D
 
Fayrouz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 8:23 pm
sorry to have agressive comments..it is my nature! when i read this i remembered the quote "home is where the heart is"...but when your heart is split in two, could home possibly be the same?
don't have to take it!
IT IS YOUR POEM. not mine.
 
Castrol said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 1:10 pm
Good stuff. It is deep.
Write on.
 
Brianna T. replied...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 7:00 pm
I lIKE IT .
 
EmmaXoxo<3 said...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 6:01 pm
I love this, this makes a great connection between a girl and her dad. Keep up the good work! ;)
 
Jatavion said...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:35 pm
this was deep hannah. good article though :)
 
Hannahbear replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:44 pm
thanks a bunch :D
im not usually that deep....dont get used to it lol ;)
 
Jatavion replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 3:46 pm
haha, no problem.
and i won't. lol :)
 
Hannahbear replied...
Oct. 28, 2009 at 4:19 pm
haha, :D :P
 
Jatavion replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 8:00 pm
you talk online a lot!!! lol
 
Hannahbear replied...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 4:12 pm
what can i say...i have no life ;) lol
 
Jatavion replied...
Oct. 30, 2009 at 9:51 pm
lol. we both know thats not true
 
Hannahbear replied...
Oct. 31, 2009 at 11:32 am
lol, well maybe i do have a little bit of a life :)
 
Jatavion replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 11:38 am
mmhm. :) ____________ (i love underscores. lol)
 
Jatavion replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:15 pm
....thanks
 
Hannahbear replied...
Nov. 16, 2009 at 4:40 pm
that wasent a compliment :P lol jk
 
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