Isolated

October 21, 2009
By chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me


Stolen look pass the time.
Catching.
Cheeks flaring.
A silent plea,
Ignored.
Waiting for him
To talk.
Silence.
How could he put a veil
Over what he felt?
How could she adore him,
When all he did was lie?
Priceless words wander.
She fights in the battle of love.
But does he?


The author's comments:
My own personal experience. It sucks a lot. Enjoy!

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on Dec. 22 2009 at 9:04 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I don't have ambitions or desires.
Being a poet isn't my ambition,
it's my way of being alone.
~ Fernando Pessoa ~

That was amazing!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:51 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me

I am aware that my poem could be better in ways, but I wrote this while I was in my class looking at the one I love. It is a true and honest poem, and those are the same questions I was asking myself in class.

Thank you for replying.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 4:20 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I like the idea here, and the emotion is very clear, but I think with a bit more imagery, and fewer rhetorical questions, the poem could be stronger.

on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:30 am
colorfulldinosaur, Rosemount, Minnesota
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
I am me and thats not gonna change

Awsome :)!


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