Blind

October 21, 2009
By chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me


Laughing.
Talking.
Walking.
Never again.
They didn’t see
The red light.
They didn’t see
The black van,
Hauling a soccer princess home.
They didn’t see
The horror erupting.
They didn’t see
The little girl,
Bloody and broken.
They didn’t see
Their last moments.
Laughing.
Talking.
Walking.
Living.
Never again.


The author's comments:
This is a very sensitve piece. My friends love it. Enjoy!

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on Nov. 17 2009 at 11:53 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me

As I said before, thank you for your comments, and I appreciate your praise.

EdytD SILVER said...
on Nov. 6 2009 at 4:17 pm
EdytD SILVER, Livingston, New Jersey
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I think this is good, and I like how you keep every line short; it makes it flow well, and the up-down of each word gives it a beat. I like how the line "hauling a soccer princess home" is longer than others, as it emphasizes it. Great job!

on Nov. 2 2009 at 11:31 am
colorfulldinosaur, Rosemount, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
I am me and thats not gonna change

Whoa that was really sad but really good ! keep the work up :)

on Oct. 28 2009 at 11:30 am
chetahgirl20 PLATINUM, Rosemount, Minnesota
25 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
The world is your oyster, and the universe is a fish.
-Me

Please comment!


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