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my heart is being pierced by splinters.
the oxygen around me becoming carbon.
The clear water im draped in turns to hateful blood.
the books that once filled me with joy,
resorts to sorrow endings.
the hot iron that unwrinkles my clothes scabs my skin.
my love turns to hate.
my passion becomes lust.
the firm ground beneath my feet caves in.
i fall into a dark bottomless abyss.



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xoxokelseyxoxo said...
Jan. 19, 2010 at 1:10 pm:
i realy loved this poem. and like silverdawn said your word choices are amazing
 
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SilverDawn said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 10:32 pm:
great word choices! i agree with everything annabelle said. your poetry is amazing
 
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Annabelle7614 said...
Nov. 8, 2009 at 6:29 pm:
OMG I love this! It has really good symbolism and I like the flow and pattern of it! Very good!
 
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