Oh, Sweet Melancholy Autumn MAG

October 20, 2009
By FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."


I wore a crown
of leaves today
to feel once more
like your Queen –

My Lord,
the leaves have fallen,
faded,
gone,
and I am nothing again.


The author's comments:
For my Gnome King... (Alex)

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Rose.bj BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2016 at 11:30 am
Rose.bj BRONZE, Plymouth, Minnesota
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Promise me you'll always remember, you're braver than you believe, stronger than you seem, and smarter than you think." ~ A.A. Milne

I love this so much! There is so much emotion and the imagery is great!

on Sep. 6 2012 at 3:10 pm
subliminal96 GOLD, Kent, Ohio
10 articles 0 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have no nation to fight for... my country is the earth and I am a citizen of the world."

Wonderful... such imagery. Elated me with emotion :). Autumn is my most beloved season.

on Apr. 2 2011 at 7:50 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Thanks! =]
Haha, I've always wanted to have a "forget you" bonfire! That, or throw all the stuff off a cliff. But that might be littering. >.>

N. said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 11:50 pm
awhhh thats so sad... but poetic, good writers always do poetic stuff..... when my bf broke up with me i just had a big fire and burt all the stuff he gave me, not as poetic..... still really good!!

N. said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 11:48 pm
oh.... thats sad but poetic and has hints of harsh humor..... good writers do poetic stuff like that... when my bf broke up with me i had a bonfire burnt the stuff he gave me then had smores.... not as poetic.... still a really good poem!

on Mar. 30 2011 at 11:33 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Thank you! Well, long story short: my first boyfriend was the Gnome King (trust me), and I made myself a little flower/leaf crown right after we broke up. I wore it around for a day, and the next morning, the leaves had all shriveled up. It kind of dawned on me then that I had lost him.
Now you know! ^ ^' Thank you for commenting! <3

on Mar. 30 2011 at 8:41 pm
little-miss-mistakes GOLD, Plano, Texas
18 articles 2 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
even after all these years the sun has never said to the earth, you owe me... look at what a love like that can do, it can light up the sky

i like this... especially the opening line..... i'm not really sure what it means... but it seems meaningful to you.... keep it up!!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 1:56 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Thanks! =)

on Mar. 29 2011 at 1:56 pm
FreakyEyed DIAMOND, Juneau, Alaska
53 articles 29 photos 111 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This, too, will pass."

Thank you so much! =D

on Mar. 28 2011 at 11:44 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

Nice! It's simplistic, yet there is so much meaning.

Please check out my poetry too if you get the chance! TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/246555/Books/


on Mar. 28 2011 at 8:36 pm
Roslyn Kaye SILVER, Nauvoo, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 7 comments
I really like this poem it short and simple. I like simple things. but it gives a lot of different veiws on the depper meanings and used to love to make leaf crowns. Keeep up the good work

on Mar. 28 2011 at 7:06 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

really good:)


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